Edited and ready. I do apologize if I seemed "Edgy". The parts that you liked, were the parts that I wrote on my own with no help. I wasn't trying to be a special snowflake.

Thank you for the advice, I will change it up tonight or tomorrow. I wasn't originally going to go for it, as I don't know much about SPECWARCOM, but a friend talked me into it, so I basically winged it.

Steam name : Corgi Jesus Age : Nineteen Character Name : Jacob Jast Character Age : Twenty-one Character Corps : Marine Character Rank : Private First-Class Planet of Origin : Earth Personality Description : Jast is a highly sociable man. He enjoys conversation, and he loves to make people laugh. H...